3 out of 4 stars
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Nyxe may be the most poetic science fiction book I have read in a long time. This is true because not only are several of the chapters prefaced with bits of original and germane poetry, but the visualization the author conveys is at times stunning.
Nyxe is a genetically enhanced young woman, presumably in her late teens, who we first meet as 'Test Subject 17.' Guru is an Artificial Intelligence (AI) who is 17's lone companion and mentor. Once awakened from her nearly 400 year slumber, subject 17 is presumed to be the last living woman on a post-apocalyptic Earth charged to make the planet habitable for humans. Did humanity really wipe itself out? Can one AI and one human girl repopulate the Earth and restore an idealized humanity to the planet?
The scientists that modified 17 operate on the premise that the basic faults of humanity can be eradicated through genetics and a lack of exposure to 'tainted' humans. Once the reader moves past such an obvious oversimplification the story flows well. Nyxe explores the stark compound which housed her and the outside world with a sense of wonder and beauty for each new experience. The descriptive visualization is enthralling. The story induces the reader forward with its measured pace of discovery, propelled by the enthusiastic and uncontainable Nyxe.
The biggest critique I have of this novel is the awkward phrasing and strangely structured sentences scattered throughout. These instances can be confusing and are detractive from the reader's experience. One example is as follows: "I smiled delightfully and lusting the desire to get as clean as possible." At times it feels as though the text is taken either from a translation or that English is a second language for the author.
Another issue with the novel is strange incidents of anthropomorphic thinking. One example is: "It's a waterfall after all, housed with this beautiful luminescence calling me to dive in her and explore." Another example alludes to the East and West as sisters: "I see, so that would mean east would be a contrast to west - an excitement of her sister's taste." It is difficult to determine whether this type of reference makes the story more poetic or whether it is just plain distracting.
Nyxe by Jedaiah Ramnarine is a truly compelling coming of age story appropriate and enjoyable for any who enjoy science fiction, a good coming of age story or a new approach to the post-apocalyptic story. Due to the awkward structuring of sentences and random anthropomorphism, I must remove a star from the rating I would otherwise award this book. Therefore, I give Nyxe a rating of 3 out of 4 stars.
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