Official Review: Illusion by Nassim Nakad

[zeldas_lullaby]

Ergh... they don't do much of anything. Not very animated, are they?

[bluemel4]

They are just stuck in a sad mid jump...

[nassimnakad]

Bluemel, I love your little smilie! I am so obsessed with the banana guys lately that I must have missed the sign-holding one.



-- 03 Jun 2015, 20:06 --

Nassim, I probably wouldn't have given your book more than two stars either, so don't blame BookOwlie.

If you want to become a better writer, you have to focus your story and make it less disjointed and confusing. Have you considered doing a writing workshop or taking a class? Your story is an odd one that definitely needs refinement in order to be good. You've got some thoughts you want to share, but you don't have them presented in a way that really works. Being a good writer requires more than the power of your convictions. But you're a unique person... I think you can find the right way to express yourself.

Good points! Actually, I'm sure some parts of the story are intended to confuse the reader.

Hey, did you catch the new banana I discovered - the line-dancing one. Conga line!

Life is confusing .... I like the bananas

-- 05 Jun 2015, 16:25 --

Nassim, I probably wouldn't have given your book more than two stars either, so don't blame BookOwlie.

If you want to become a better writer, you have to focus your story and make it less disjointed and confusing. Have you considered doing a writing workshop or taking a class? Your story is an odd one that definitely needs refinement in order to be good. You've got some thoughts you want to share, but you don't have them presented in a way that really works. Being a good writer requires more than the power of your convictions. But you're a unique person... I think you can find the right way to express yourself.

Zeldas, thank you for the advice
It's just my first essay, we'll see what's next.

[zeldas_lullaby]

You're welcome! I'm glad you appreciated it! Yeah, who knows where life's journey will take you?

[Jesska6029]

Nice review! I enjoyed how you recommend this book to others you think may enjoy it, even though it wasn't your cup of tea. Great detail in the review too!

[bookowlie]

Thanks Jesska! It's certainly a unique storyline.

[Thesaurus Rex]

You must be the best reviewer in the whole world with your many amazing reviews that are all popular topics on the site. You must be an author as well with your excellent skills in analysing book content.

[bookowlie]

You must be the best reviewer in the whole world with your many amazing reviews that are all popular topics on the site. You must be an author as well with your excellent skills in analysing book content.

You must be the best left-handed compliment giver in the whole world. Maybe I should consider a writing career based on your left-handed compliments.

[shivakarthi]

Wow, Great Review!! Also such an intriguing plot!! Good luck Nassim Nakad!

[bookowlie]

Thanks Shivakarthi and welcome to the board! The plot is definitely unique.

[nassimnakad]

Wow, Great Review!! Also such an intriguing plot!! Good luck Nassim Nakad!

Thank you Shivakarthi, I hope you will find time to read the book

[shivakarthi]

sure ofcourse!!