Official Review: Lady of the Manor by Adrian Heflin
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Re: Official Review: Lady of the Manor by Adrian Heflin
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Disturbing stories are often the most interesting.PashaRu wrote:Thanks! A disturbing but interesting story, for sure.
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You know, that's just deplorable. Writers like that make good self-published authors everywhere look bad. If you can't write, you can't write! That's fine, but do something else creative.
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What a funny coincidence!PashaRu wrote:Funny, I just wrote a review, the first draft of which likened the book to a car accident. Actually, I said it was like a pileup on the interstate. But the "disturbing" thing was how awful the grammar was. It is literally the worst-written book I've ever read in terms of grammar, punctuation, and syntax. Of course I gave it a "1," and the review won't be published. But on the advice of a friend I excised the car accident reference from the final draft. Probably a good thing.