Finn wrote:... the 'over-hyped' scenes of unrealistic sexual waffle..
...... Might I point out that just because some peoples sexual experience Isnt as... Shall we say 'graphic'?.... As this poorly written book, that doesn't mean its 'unrealistic' in other, especially D/s, relationships. Especially considering this book is about a D/s relationship and NOT about what is considered as normal relationships.. what's normal in ones mind and life is extremely different than what is normal in another's. We see it as wrong and unrealistic, true. D/s see it as their view of the norm. It's a very badly written look into their world.