Review by Momiji1987 -- Puffy and the Formidable Foe

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Review by Momiji1987 -- Puffy and the Formidable Foe

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[Following is a volunteer review of "Puffy and the Formidable Foe" by Marie Lepkowski and Ann Marie Hannon.]
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4 out of 4 stars
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Puffy and the Formidable Foe is a children’s book by Marie G. Lepkowski, Ann M. Hannon, and Margaret B. Hannon.

The story is relatively simple and cute and has adorable characters. Puffy is a curious cat that gets into trouble with some humorous results. The story is something kids and adults can both enjoy reading and learning from together. It has a good message that parents can use to teach their children about safety without frightening or giving them worries they shouldn’t have to think about before bedtime.

The authors really put some thought into ways to make this book more interactive. Unlike most books for children, this one provides parents and teachers with a list of ideas to stimulate learning and creativity. I liked this feature and the list of suggestions they put together. I think these ideas would be especially helpful to parents that don’t have a lot of time to think of ways to make reading more fun for their kids. The authors also include an illustration of Puffy that children can color as a reward and offer the option to request additional coloring pages and word lists from the book for free.

Puffy and the other animal characters are illustrated by Ann M. Hannon and Margaret B. Hannon. The drawings are something kids in particular could relate to and even copy successfully if they enjoy drawing or tracing. If I had kids we would probably use this book as inspiration to write and draw our own Puffy adventures. The drawings are cute and expressive and adequately illustrate the story.

I think the most notable and different aspect of this book is the vocabulary the authors use. This isn’t Dick and Jane with simple words and grammar. The authors make it a point to tell the story with very advanced words like “formidable” and “foe” as evidenced in the title. I’m not sure how most kids would react to this choice by the authors, but I would have loved learning words like this when I was little. I think gifted children would be the most appreciative of the vocabulary in this book, but the authors don’t specify the age or type of child they’re aiming for. As such, anyone who wants to give their kids a boost in language learning could potentially use this book as a tool to aid comprehension and encourage retention.

This is a good book for parents that want their kids to learn new vocabulary and experience a cautionary tale with a funny outcome. The rhyming words are interesting and novel for a book aimed at young children, but the interactive aspects make this a book parents and kids can enjoy returning to and learning from again and again. I rate this book 4 out of 4 stars for its creativity, interesting vocabulary, and interactivity.

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This is a well written and thoroughly edited review. Great description of the book and I like how you included the extras and target audience. My only suggestion would be to give an actual age range. Young children can be really subjective especially to a person without children who is looking for a book as a gift.
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CommMayo wrote:This is a well written and thoroughly edited review. Great description of the book and I like how you included the extras and target audience. My only suggestion would be to give an actual age range. Young children can be really subjective especially to a person without children who is looking for a book as a gift.
Thank you! That's a good point, but also kind of hard to answer. The drawings and the story seems appropriate for very young children age two and up. The words are advanced and more appropriate for older kids who can read, but younger children who are gifted would probably like the challenge. Thanks for the feedback!
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Nice review! I will surely read this book to the kids.
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Great! Hope they love it!
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Momiji1987 wrote: 04 Nov 2017, 03:04 I think the most notable and different aspect of this book is the vocabulary the authors use. This isn’t Dick and Jane with simple words and grammar.
Ha! You made me laugh here. You're right, this is not Dick and Jane. The words used offer great opportunities for learning.

For me, this book scored highly for rhyming and offering the parental discussion syllabus. I was disappointed, however, with Puffy's portrayal. He was illustrated differently on most pages. Some pages he had eyelashes; some pages he did not. Some pages he had a pink nose, whereas on others it was grey or white.

Did any of you notice this? I only rated the book 3/4. Do you think the differing Puffys warranted negative impact on the score?

My review here:
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NL Hartje wrote: 28 Jan 2018, 14:17
Momiji1987 wrote: 04 Nov 2017, 03:04 I think the most notable and different aspect of this book is the vocabulary the authors use. This isn’t Dick and Jane with simple words and grammar.
Ha! You made me laugh here. You're right, this is not Dick and Jane. The words used offer great opportunities for learning.

For me, this book scored highly for rhyming and offering the parental discussion syllabus. I was disappointed, however, with Puffy's portrayal. He was illustrated differently on most pages. Some pages he had eyelashes; some pages he did not. Some pages he had a pink nose, whereas on others it was grey or white.

Did any of you notice this? I only rated the book 3/4. Do you think the differing Puffys warranted negative impact on the score?

My review here:
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Yes, I’m not really a fan of the art style either. Some of it is cute, but like you said, the quality fluctuates from picture to picture. I think I said in my review that because the drawings are simple, it would be easy for kids to copy and draw their own stories; so in my opinion it’s basic, but some kids might like it. I do like that the authors attempted to illustrate their own book even though art isn’t really their forte. That is admirable because I’m sure they realize their talents lie more in the story. I don’t really know how to feel about it either way. It is a self-published book, so I guess I decided to be more forgiving in my review, but I think it’s fair to take off stars to express your opinion of the overall experience of the story. I agree it would be a better book with more professional art, but I also respect the authors for illustrating it on their own. I look forward to checking out and commenting on your review!
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Momiji1987 wrote: 04 Nov 2017, 03:04 I also respect the authors for illustrating it on their own.


I agree with you there! They have way more guts and talent than I :)
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Nice review. I love this book. It is so cute and funny. Puffy really inspires you.
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pinklover wrote: 02 Feb 2018, 00:03 Nice review. I love this book. It is so cute and funny. Puffy really inspires you.
I agree, this is a great book for kids. :) Thanks for reading my review!
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pinklover wrote: 02 Feb 2018, 00:03 Nice review. I love this book. It is so cute and funny. Puffy really inspires you.
I agree, this is a great book for kids. :) Thanks for reading my review!
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