Review by Spirit Wandering -- The 11.05 Murders

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Review by Spirit Wandering -- The 11.05 Murders

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[Following is a volunteer review of "The 11.05 Murders" by Brian O'Hare.]
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In The 11:05 Murders, by Brian O’Hare, we meet Chief Inspector Jim Sheehan and his police unit. They are faced with solving three related murders that take place in Northern Ireland. Each killing happens at exactly 11:05 pm (hence the title) on three consecutive Tuesday nights.

The story opens 12 years earlier. Lynda, a student at a college party, is forced into a room by three male students where she is then raped. The reader has several mysteries to solve: How are the present murders related to what happened to Lynda more than a decade ago, who is the killer and why did he or she commit these crimes?

Action in the novel centers primarily around Woman Detective Sargent Denise Stewart. She has recently been promoted and is also being transferred into Sheehan’s unit, after exposing a case of corruption by her former supervisor. Her process of moving past the negative experience at her old post and acclimating to her new one is a major secondary plot in the story. Denise is assigned to the current murder investigation and turns out to be the key to its resolution.

What I enjoyed most about the novel was the cast of characters. I particularly liked Chief Inspector Sheehan. The author draws him as a good leader, who inspires loyalty in his officers individually and as a group. He sets a high standard for his crew but at the same time encourages them to be a cohesive unit. Denise is appealing for her warm heart and crusading nature. Tom Allen is fun, bold and yet amusingly awkward, all at same time.

It was disappointing to me that, early on, I easily guessed the killer and my choice turned out to be correct. While I was almost distracted by several red herrings thrown out by the author as the novel unfolded, they were not convincing enough to keep me guessing throughout or question my initial choice.

I would recommend this book to those who like murder mysteries. However, I would caution that this is not a “cozy mystery.” There are graphic details about the method of the murders and the state of the bodies. This novel might also appeal to those who have an interest in Northern Ireland, as some events described in the book took place against the back drop of “The Troubles.”

I rate The 11:05 Murders 3 out of 4 stars. It didn’t quite get to 4 stars for me, in part because I easily guessed the killer. Also, the early chapters could have been better edited in terms of the pace of the narrative. There were several that ended rather abruptly and without a good sense of transition to the next chapter. One example involves the testimony Denise gives in the corruption case.

However, these are minor criticisms. Overall, this one is well worth your time if you are a murder mystery fan.

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Ah, it is always a turn off when one can easily guess the killer in a mystery book. Great review.
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Jaime Lync wrote:Ah, it is always a turn off when one can easily guess the killer in a mystery book. Great review.
Yes, it was unfortunate since the characters were appealing. Thanks for reading the review and replying.
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I agree that the action centers around the new detective. Her past and present occupy a good deal of the reader's attention. I too guessed the killer from clues given quite early on. Still an interesting read. Thanks for your interesting review.
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Thanks for your reply. Yes, it was still a good read. At one point, a couple of red herrings had me questioning my choice so that held my interest until the end.
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I knew who it was by the second time I met him! Oh I'm so glad that I wasn't alone. You just made my day!
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Glad to hear it. Thanks for reading my review and replying.
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If I'm going to read a mystery, I don't want to be able to guess the killer. Sounds interesting though. God job on the review.
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Yes, guessing the killer was disappointing but it was still a good read. Thanks for replying on my review.
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Good review! It sounds like the characters are a strong point of this book. For me, that can often be the difference between a good read and a bad one. I have added this to my "Want To Read" list
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Great review! You captured my feelings exactly. I also knew who the murderer was from very early on, which I wished wasn't the case. But, you're right, the cast of characters were well done, so that was a definite positive. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
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hsimone wrote:Great review! You captured my feelings exactly. I also knew who the murderer was from very early on, which I wished wasn't the case. But, you're right, the cast of characters were well done, so that was a definite positive. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Yes, it seems that several of us easily guessed the identity of the murderer. Thanks for reading my review and your nice reply.

-- 27 May 2017, 20:02 --
WordHound wrote:Good review! It sounds like the characters are a strong point of this book. For me, that can often be the difference between a good read and a bad one. I have added this to my "Want To Read" list
I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for reading my review and replying.
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I am a C/T/M/H fanatic so gore is normal fare for me. This book is among my wanted books. Your review further whetted my appetite!

I like your writing style. Your review was an enjoyable read.
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Very nice review . Buy I won't be reading this book I don't like story
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Miriam Molina wrote:I am a C/T/M/H fanatic so gore is normal fare for me. This book is among my wanted books. Your review further whetted my appetite!

I like your writing style. Your review was an enjoyable read.
Thanks for the nice compliment. I hope you enjoy the book. :)

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Emma Swan wrote:Very nice review . Buy I won't be reading this book I don't like story
Thanks for reading the review and replying. :)
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