Short Story Contest 1 - "Billy's Coloring Book"

[Bruce444]

Great story on the first read but will have to give it more detailed view. Keep up the good work!

[Lisafees]

what alovely story the last part about the exacution was very subtle love it.

[Xiaomi]

the story is moving, I got touched. It will be better if there is some more detail description.
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All is flour that comes to his mill.

[Timpane]

I find so much of love strong feeling there and this is actually have some reason. If you desire identical kind of more article then just proceed through it item line.

[Nhocngamy]

ok i think so

[Francine]

hello
this is very good story .I am reading that story the content of this story is very interesting and inspiring a person.
Thanks
Regards
Francine

[TimeKeeperApprentice]

Very fascinating story. I wonder who the author is...

[Garathnormanmtts]

Wonderful story and Thanks to the one who has written this beautiful story very creatively. Looking forward for the next.

[scfinder]

this is a good story, keep writing

[kimmy123]

great story and very useful.

[oinkystudio]

great story!! I actually thought that billy is a kid... I never expected the twist at the end..

[Carla Hurst-Chandler]

Excellent twist!

[godzillalives58]

this is great

[manirser]

Now a day short very famous because with in the short time we are know whole concept of story .people how making the short story with message.

[sexdoll]

The story was written wonderfully but I can't seem to understand the last part. Anyway, the writer seems to write this story very creatively.